Contents page feedback

for my rough cut I got the following advice and changes to make -

I need to include small descriptions under each story
I should in corporate the gold more into the contents page
Include a smaller photo at the bottom to fill some space
Make it fit in exactly with the front cover
Replace photo with a new one (photos have been taken)

I will post my improvements once I have completed my final copy

the good things that I took away from my rough cut were the following-
they liked the range of texts I had used
they liked the similarity between the front cover and the contents page .which meant it was clear that they were part of the same magazine.